homework
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1. He cried at the top of his voice that rushed to the spot.
2. We had worked for five hours. We went home. (i don't know)
3. He had been hit on the head. He fell unconscious. (i don't know)
4. She delivered a performance that was stunning.
5. He was overwhelmed by emotion. He could not utter a singer word. (i don't know)
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T. Jeny
1. He cried at the top of his voice that rushed to the spot.
2. We had worked for five hours. We went home. (i don\'t know)
>>Having worked for five hours we went home.
3. He had been hit on the head. He fell unconscious. (i don\'t know)
>>Having been hit on the head, he fell unconscious.
4. She delivered a performance that was stunning.
>>She delivered a stunning performance.
5. He was overwhelmed by emotion. He could not utter a singer word. (i don\'t know)
>>Overwhelmed by emotion, he could not utter a word.
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