Homework~

My father used to make wine. Usually he made a red wine, composed grapes, sugar and alcohol. Taste of wine depends on taste of grapes and amount of sugar. Wine, made last year is taste good beside too sweet. I drunk wine adding some ice cubes. He also used to make alcohol, composed medicinal herbs. He often climbed mountain to gather medicinal herbs. When I sicked, my father let me drunk some alcohol, made medicinal herbs good for stomachache. Then I became better. Not much later, I sicked again with hangover. Actually It tastes awful except wine. Even it smells terrible too. Anyway, my family didn't like alcohol although we have many alcohol. So my father usually gave alcohol to other people.

Hi [이름], I hope to taste your father’s home made wine, it sounds delicious (^_^) Here are the corrections Stay safe, --Connie--   My father used to make wine. >> My father use to make wine.  Usually he made a red wine, composed grapes, sugar and alcohol. >> Usually he makes a red wine composed of grapes, sugar and alcohol. Taste of wine depends on taste of grapes and amount of sugar. >> The taste of wine depends on the taste of grapes and the amount of sugar. Wine, made last year is taste good beside too sweet. >> The wine that was made tastes good and too sweet. I drunk wine adding some ice cubes. >> I drink wine with ice. He also used to make alcohol, composed medicinal herbs. >> He also uses to make alcohol, composed of medicinal herbs. He often climbed mountain to gather medicinal herbs. >> He often climbs the mountain to gather medicinal herbs. When I sicked, my father let me drunk some alcohol, made medicinal herbs good for stomachache. >> When I get sick, my father let me drink some alcohol made up of medicinal herbs, it really good for stomachache. Then I became better. >> Then I’ll be better. Not much later, I sicked again with hangover. >> After that, I’ll suffer with hangover. Actually It tastes awful except wine. >> Actually it tastes awful except the wine.  Even it smells terrible too. >> Even the smell, it smells terrible, too. Anyway, my family didn't like alcohol although we have many alcohol. >> Anyway, my family didn’t like alcohol although we have much alcohol. So my father usually gave alcohol to other people. >> Correct^^