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- What was the best rule you ever had? Why?
For me, the best rule was when I fight with classmate, then I can\'t play in the schoolyard for 5 days because I think that can prevent fighting.
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For me, the best rule was when I fight with classmate, then I can\'t play in the schoolyard for 5 days because I think that can prevent fighting.
>>For me, the best rule was when I fought with my classmate, I couldn\'t play in the school yard for 5 days so I think that can prevent fights.
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