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I have to admit that I'm addicted to e-mail. Whenever I get home, I log in and check to see if I've gotten any new mail . I even enjoy reading forwards of jokes and stories. I usually read all my new messages before I log off . A lot of times I'll send an immediate messages . I've had to create a lot of folders to store all the messages I've received. I don't want to delete them, because you never know when you might want to read them again. I mean, maybe one day you don't get any new reply . If that's the case, you're glad to have all the old ones to look at. If

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Thank you very much for sending over your composition. Anyway, please go over some of the corrections. They are very minimal. I have to commend you for an almost-perfect-composition! See you later. Take care.

-T. Michelle-

I have to admit that I\'m addicted to e-mail.

>> Correct.

Whenever I get home, I log in and check to see if I\'ve gotten any new mail .

>> Correct.

I even enjoy reading forwards of jokes and stories.

>> I even enjoy reading forwarded jokes and stories.

I usually read all my new messages before I log off .

>> Correct. Just make sure your punctuation mark is in the right location.

>> I usually read all my new messages before I log off.

A lot of times I\'ll send an immediate messages .

>> A lot of times, I\'ll send immediate messages.

I\'ve had to create a lot of folders to store all the messages I\'ve received.

>> Correct.

I don\'t want to delete them, because you never know when you might want to read them again.

>> Correct.

 I mean, maybe one day you don\'t get any new reply .

>> I mean, maybe one day you won\'t get any new reply.

 If that\'s the case, you\'re glad to have all the old ones to look at.

>> Correct.

Or >> If that\'s the case, you\'re glad to have all the old ones to read.

If

>> I think you were not able to paste the complete sentence, [이름]. ^^,