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2012-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. He didn't earn enough money. Therefore, his wife decided to get a job. 2. That house isn't big enough for us, and furthermore, it's too expensive. 3. We have plenty of money and workers; thus, we hope to finish the house remodeling soon. 4. She's extremely rich; however, she's not snobbish. 5. It was a windy and rainy night. nevertheless, I decided to go out.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Sir [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I really admire you for devoting some time to study English. I know how busy you are, but you always exert an effort to improve your skill. Keep it up! Take care and have a good time! T. JanE ^^ 1. He didn\'t earn enough money. Therefore, his wife decided to get a job.>> Correct 2. That house isn\'t big enough for us, and furthermore, it\'s too expensive.>> Correct 3. We have plenty of money and workers; thus, we hope to finish the house remodeling soon.>> Correct 4. She\'s extremely rich; however, she\'s not snobbish.>> Correct 5. It was a windy and rainy night. nevertheless, I decided to go out. >> Correct  

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