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2012-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1.more more 2.the most popular 3.s[이름]r 4.farther 5.fewer I play the piano. I prefer to listen to K-pop and American pop. A lot, I can't count it. Yes of course, it helps me relax and gives me a good energy. Music in my life, it helped me. When I want to get something,music gave me a desire.

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1.more more >> Correct 2.the most popular >> Correct 3.s[이름]r >> Correct 4.farther >> The school will be closed until further notice. 5.fewer>> CorrectI play the piano. I prefer to listen to K-pop and American pop.>> CorrectA lot, I can\'t count it. >> I can\'t count them anymore because there\'s a  lot.Yes of course, it helps me relax and gives me a good energy.>> Yes of course, it relaxes me and gives me a good energy.Music in my life, it helped me. >> Music has a big help in my life. When I want to get something,music gave me a desire. >> Music gaves me a desire to get something I want.

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