Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay:
Write a composition about the your favorite movie and tell me the reason why you like that movie.
I like Fantastic4 .
Because Fantastic4 is funnny movie.
And I like battleship too.
I don't like horror movie.
I don't like horror.
what is your favorite mavie?
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]^^
Thanks for doing this compostion. You were very expressive, however you wrote a short composition. Feel free to write a longer composition. I also like the movie Fanstastic 4 and Battleship too but my favorite movie until now is Harry Potter. Thanks for sharing me about this. See you again tomorrow.
T.Liza^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Essay:Write a composition about the your favorite movie and tell me the reason why you like that movie. I like Fantastic4 .
>>Correct
>>Better: My favorite movie is the Fantastic 4.Because Fantastic4 is funnny movie.
>>Because Fantastic 4 is a funny movie.And I like battleship too.>>I like the movie Battleship too.I don\'t like horror movie.
>>CorrectI don\'t like horror.>>I don\'t like anything that is horrifying.what is your favorite mavie?
>>How about you what is your favorite movie?
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