Homework

2012-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Essay: Write a composition about the your favorite movie and tell me the reason why you like that movie. I like Fantastic4 . Because Fantastic4 is funnny movie. And I like battleship too. I don't like horror movie. I don't like horror. what is your favorite mavie?

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]^^ Thanks for doing this compostion. You were very expressive, however you wrote a short composition. Feel free to write  a longer composition. I also like the movie Fanstastic 4 and Battleship too but my favorite movie until now is Harry Potter. Thanks for sharing me about this. See you again tomorrow. T.Liza^^ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Essay:Write a composition about the your favorite movie and tell me the reason why you like that movie. I like Fantastic4 . >>Correct >>Better: My favorite movie is the Fantastic 4.Because Fantastic4 is funnny movie. >>Because Fantastic 4 is a funny movie.And I like battleship too.>>I like the movie Battleship too.I don\'t like horror movie. >>CorrectI don\'t like horror.>>I don\'t like anything that is horrifying.what is your favorite mavie? >>How about you what is your favorite movie?

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