Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition:
A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child's development. What gift could you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
> I'll give child soccer ball because I'm not good at soccer, so I regret my childhood why I didn't hard training soccer.
The guys think that the soccer's skills is very important to men.
They frequently talk about their soccer ability and do soccer game very many times in military service period.
Yesterday was birthday of our company.
So we climbed mountain and have some alchols that's why I couldn't receive your call. Just going to work that is my best. :(
See you next Monday.
Have a nice weekends!
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]! Oh I see, so that\'s the reason why you didn\'t answer my call . You must\'ve been really drunk. But don\'t worry about it. I just hope you still get to work hard and well in spite of your hangover. See you Monday and enjoy your weekend!
T. Aurora
Dear [Name],>>Correct!HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Composition:A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child\'s development. What gift could you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.> I\'ll give child soccer ball because I\'m not good at soccer, so I regret my childhood why I didn\'t hard training soccer.
>>I\'ll give a child a soccer ball because I\'m not good at soccer so I regret why I didn\'t train hard in my childhood.The guys think that the soccer\'s skills is very important to men.
>>Guys think that soccer skills is very important to men.They frequently talk about their soccer ability and do soccer game very many times in military service period.>>They frequently talk about their soccer ability and playing soccer during my military service.Yesterday was birthday of our company.
>>Yesterday was the anniversary of our company.So we climbed mountain and have some alchols that\'s why I couldn\'t receive your call.
>>So we climbed a mountain and had some alcohol. That\'s why I couldn\'t receive your call.
Just going to work that is my best. :(
>>I\'m just going to work and do my best.See you next Monday.
>>Correct!Have a nice weekends!
>>Have a nice weekend!
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