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Fastfood is very good for busy people and when I was student, I and my freinds went to there at times. It doesn't take long time to cook, delicious and cheap. But, it's price so high than before. It's almost same price of rice and others. But, nowadays most of people know that it contains so much choesterol which will be affected our health. Especially, parents who have a baby, child and student don't like it if their children are likely to take it. I guess if we do take it so much like hamburger, cup noodle etc, our health must be malfuntion. Do you want a healthy? Don't take it too much.

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Fastfood is very good for busy people and when I was student, I and my freinds went to there at times.
>> Fastfood is very good for busy people and when I was a student, me and my friends go to fastfood chains most of the time.
It doesn\'t take long time to cook, delicious and cheap.
>> It doesn\'t take a long time to cook, and it is delicious and cheap.
But, it\'s price so high than before.
>> But its price is high now compared to its price before.
It\'s almost same price of rice and others.
>> It\'s almost of the same price with rice and all the others.
But, nowadays most of people know that it contains so much choesterol which will be affected our health.
>> But nowadays, most people know that it contains too much cholesterol which will gravely affect our health.
Especially, parents who have a baby, child and student don\'t like it if their children are likely to take it.
>> Parents don\'t like their babies or children to take it in.
I guess if we do take it so much like hamburger, cup noodle etc, our health must be malfuntion.
>> i guess, if we take in so much hamburger, cup noodles, and so on, the state of our health will likely deteriorate.
Do you want a healthy?
>> Do you want to be healthy?
Don\'t take it too much.
>> Correct!