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2012-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Today's homework:D President must be truth and clean. So s/he have to keep her/his election pledges. because people in the nation elected president with pledges. Also s/he honestly tell people the whole situation that related to the nation and all things that people want to know about the nation. President should admit her/his fault when s/he make a mistake. and s/he must not use individually taxes. President should think how to improve people's life. For example there are many people who are suffer from cold and hunger. So president consistently support them till they are not cold and hunger. Happy Monday!

강사 첨삭

You have written an exemplary composition. Good job on giving details though you can still improve on choosing and varying your vocabulary. Try to learn more and learn how to use them to avoid using the same words over and over. Nonetheless, I\'m always happy to read your answer and I\'m proud of the effort you\'ve put into it as well. T. Aurora Today\'s homework:D>>Correct!President must be truth and clean. >>The president must be honest and clean. So s/he have to keep her/his election pledges. >>So he/she have to keep her/his election pledges. because people in the nation elected president with pledges. >>Because the people in the nation elected the president based on their pledges.Also s/he honestly tell people the whole situation that related to the nation and all things that people want to know about the nation. >>Also he/she must honestly tell people the whole situation related to the nation and all things that  people want to know about the nation. President should admit her/his fault when s/he make a mistake. and s/he must not use individually taxes. >>The president should admit his/her fault when he/she make a mistake and he/she must not use the taxes for personal use.President should think how to improve people\'s life. >>The president should think about how to improve the people\'s life. For example there are many people who are suffer from cold and hunger. >>For example, there are many people suffering from cold and hunber. So president consistently support them till they are not cold and hunger.>>So the president must consistently support them till they are not cold and hungry. >>So the president must consistently support them till they are better off. Happy Monday! >>Correct!

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