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2012-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

1. for 2.for 3.after 4.at 5.at We sometimes bow so we are getting familiar.But we can't often [이름]t because I am a single. They have family. They have a grandmother, two son. Two son like to ride a bike with his father. The first son is good at studing at school.Their mom is a housewife. I think she is so kind to them. But she do not like her a mother in law before. Now they have a good relationship. Time is a pill I think. And this problem is so normal. I think they have no problems. They helped each other so now they are happy.

강사 첨삭

Hello Winnie. A great day to you! I am so happy that you\'re improving in terms of your sentences in your compositions. :) Keep it up! You can do it!!! Have a nice day... Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: 1. for >> Correct 2.for >> Correct 3.after >> My sister looks for the kids on Saturday. 4.at >> Correct 5.at>> CorrectWe sometimes bow so we are getting familiar. >> We sometimes bow so we could be recognized. But we can\'t often [이름]t because I am a single. >> But we can\'t often [이름]t because I am single. They have family. >> They have a family. They have a grandmother, two son. >> They have a grandmother and two sons. Two son like to ride a bike with his father. >> Their two sons like to ride a bike with their father. The first son is good at studing at school. >> The first son is good at studying in school. Their mom is a housewife. >> Correct I think she is so kind to them. >> Correct But she do not like her a mother in law before. >> But she did not like her a mother-in-law before. Now they have a good relationship. >> They have a good relationship now. Time is a pill I think. >> Correct And this problem is so normal.>> CorrectI think they have no problems.>> CorrectThey helped each other so now they are happy. >> They\'re helping each other so now they are happy.

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