Homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
"Can money buy happiness?"
I think money can't buy happiness.
Of course if i have money, I can do a lot of things.
But without it, We can happy and satisfy our life. :)
Hi. Alice.
I uploaded my video.
Please watch this video and enjoy it and also leave some comments. :)
http://youtu.be/0E_m_wPJtVc
강사 첨삭
Hi Philip!
Thanks for doing your homework. ^^
Very good point, Philip! It is true that money can never buy happiness.
Anyway, I will watch the video later. Thanks!
Good night and sleep tight!
~ Teacher Alice
\"Can money buy happiness?\"
>> Correct!I think money can\'t buy happiness.
>> Correct!Of course if i have money, I can do a lot of things.
>> Of course if I have money, I can do a lot of things. *Always capitalize the first singular pronoun, I.But without it, We can happy and satisfy our life. :)
>> But without it, we can still be happy and be satisfied with our life. :)Hi. Alice.
>> Hi Alice. I uploaded my video.
>> Correct! Please watch this video and enjoy it and also leave some comments. :)
>> Correct!
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