Homework!!

2012-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

학생이 쓴 원문

"Can money buy happiness?" I think money can't buy happiness. Of course if i have money, I can do a lot of things. But without it, We can happy and satisfy our life. :) Hi. Alice. I uploaded my video. Please watch this video and enjoy it and also leave some comments. :) http://youtu.be/0E_m_wPJtVc

강사 첨삭

Hi Philip! Thanks for doing your homework. ^^ Very good point, Philip! It is true that money can never buy happiness. Anyway, I will watch the video later. Thanks! Good night and sleep tight! ~ Teacher Alice \"Can money buy happiness?\" >> Correct!I think money can\'t buy happiness. >> Correct!Of course if i have money, I can do a lot of things. >> Of course if I have money, I can do a lot of things. *Always capitalize the first singular pronoun, I.But without it, We can happy and satisfy our life. :) >> But without it, we can still be happy and be satisfied with our life. :)Hi. Alice. >> Hi Alice. I uploaded my video. >> Correct! Please watch this video and enjoy it and also leave some comments. :) >> Correct!

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