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Nowdays many people interect with each other through the internet and a smart phone etc. So they can find more news of the people. For example, they can be friend easily and they share the information about their preferences. The technology connects people to people strongly. But if they have no good maners it is dangerous. So we should be careful. I think the technology gives me a good present. I usually use it. I can see my friends on abroad whenever. It is marvellous!!

Hi there again Winnie!! Internet has been a big help for everyone of us. But there are poeple who are doing bad activities using the cyberspace so be very extra careful in sharing your information to other people. T[이름]k you for giving your time in writing a composition like this. Please check out my corrections. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara Nowadays many people interect with each other through the internet and a smart phone etc.>> Nowadays many people interect with each other through the internet, smart phone etc.So they can find more news of the people. >> So they can find more news about people. For example, they can be friend easily and they share the information about their preferences. >> For example, they can be friends easily and they can share the information about their preferences. The technology connects people to people strongly. >> The technology strongly connects people to people. But if they have no good maners it is dangerous. >> CorrectSo we should be careful. >> Correct I think the technology gives me a good present. >> I think technology gives me a good benefit. I usually use it. >> Correct I can see my friends on abroad whenever. >> I can see my friends abroad whenever the time is. It is marvellous!! >> Correct