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2012-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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1. When I decided to go abroad, I knew that my mother would upset. 2. Where did you buy this from? 3.We have already rejected his offer. 4. The poor should not laugh at. 5. I know it is not the right thing to do. Hi Jeny I was lazy these days, so I didn't do my homeworks. I would like to recall my passion for learning English. From tomorrow, I have a working travel. so, I think I won't do my homeworks.;;; Thank you~

강사 첨삭

Good Evening, I hope everything is fine tonight. Thanks for doing your homework, I understand if you will not be able to do your homeworks since you are busy. I appreciate the information. T. Jeny ^^ 1. When I decided to go abroad, I knew that my mother would upset. >>>When I decided to go abroad I knew that my mother would be upset.2. Where did you buy this from? >>>Correct3.We have already rejected his offer. >>>Correct4. The poor should not laugh at. >>>The poor should not be laughed at. 5. I know it is not the right thing to do. >>>I know it is not the right thing to do. OR I knew it was not the right thing to do.Hi Jeny >>>Hi Jeny,I was lazy these days, so I didn\'t do my homeworks. >>>CorrectI would like to recall my passion for learning English. >>>Correct better >>>I would like to recall my passion for learning English.From tomorrow, I have a working travel. >>>Starting tomorrow, I will have a business tripso, I think I won\'t do my homeworks.;;; >>>As a result, I think I won\'t be able to do my homeworks.Thank you~ >>>Thank you.

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