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In the world, people have so many human rights now and have to right using thoes regardless of their age and gender but, sometimes it cannot use by dictators or other situations. Especailly, Middle East Asia counties prohibit to vote for women until now. Vote is one of the basic human rights. Early of 1900s, women can vote in UK after than that it was spread UK's around counties. Women fought to find their rights since 1900s and finally, most of counties accepted women's request. In Korea, women didn't use their right until 1970 because Korea was affected by Confucianism. For example, women didn't have eat together with men until 1960s to 1970s that depends on father's or grandfather's opinion. Women didn't realize at that time what is the problem because it's our tradition. But, many women went to school to get a knowledge and could relize soon it's unfair. That's right that we have to use our human rights.

Hello there [이름]. Happy Thursday! I appreciate you for spending some time just to finish your composition. Please do check my corrections. and ask questions if you have in class. ~~ Teacher Jeny   In the world, people have so many human rights now and have to right using thoes regardless of their age and gender but, sometimes it cannot use by dictators or other situations. >> In the world, people have so many human rights now and have the right using those regardless of their age and gender. But sometimes it cannot be use by dictators or other situations.   Especailly, Middle East Asia counties prohibit to vote for women until now. >> Especially ,Middle East Asia counties prohibit voting for women until now. Vote is one of the basic human rights. >>correct! Early of 1900s, women can vote in UK after than that it was spread UK\'s around counties. >> Early of 1900s, women could vote in the UK. After then, it spread around UK\'s counties. Women fought to find their rights since 1900s and finally, most of counties accepted women\'s request. >> correct In Korea, women didn\'t use their right until 1970 because Korea was affected by Confucianism. >> In Korea, women didn\'t use their right until the 1970\'s  because Korea was affected by Confucianism.  For example, women didn\'t have eat together with men until 1960s to 1970s that depends on father\'s or grandfather\'s opinion. >> For example, women didn\'t eat together with men from 1960s to 1970s which depends on father\'s or grandfather\'s opinion. Women didn\'t realize at that time what is the problem because it\'s our tradition. >> correct  But, many women went to school to get a knowledge and could relize soon it\'s unfair. >> But, many women went to school to acquire knowledge and then soon realized ,it\'s unfair. That\'s right that we have to use our human rights. >> It\'s right that we have to use our human rights.