HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
1.We shouln't have been to the restaurant
2.We should have waited the ship
3.She should have limited the speed
4.I should have written address
5.shouln't stopped without warning
I read the Love UK,the news of Malvern House,KLM etc.Because I want to leran English.
Most of all I am intersted in U.K.
I love to read about a fashion,jewels,educations.Because I am a woman,teacher.
Yes, I've read a newspaper in London. Because I should have find a flat and leran English.
Yes, I think reading a newspaper in a foreign language is a good idea to study foreign language.
강사 첨삭
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T.Lara
1.We shouln\'t have been to the restaurant
>> We should have reserved a table.2.We should have waited the ship
>> The shop should be open (now). / The shop should have opened by now. or It should...3.She should have limited the speed
>> She shouldn\'t be doing 50. / She shouldn\'t be driving so fast. / She should be driving more slowly.4.I should have written address
>> I should have written down her address. / I should have written her address down. or I should have written it down.5.shouln\'t stopped without warning>> The driver in front shouldn\'t have stopped without warning. / ... shouldn\'t have stopped so suddenly.I read the Love UK,the news of Malvern House,KLM etc.Because I want to leran English.>>Most of all I am intersted in U.K.>> Most of all I am interested about U.K.I love to read about a fashion,jewels,educations.Because I am a woman,teacher.>> I love to read about fashion and jewelries because I am a woman and I also like to read books about education because I am a teacher.Yes, I\'ve read a newspaper in London. Because I should have find a flat and leran English.>> Yes, I\'ve read newspapers in London because I had to find my flat and learn English at the same time.Yes, I think reading a newspaper in a foreign language is a good idea to study foreign language.
>> Correct
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