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2012-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1.We shouln't have been to the restaurant 2.We should have waited the ship 3.She should have limited the speed 4.I should have written address 5.shouln't stopped without warning I read the Love UK,the news of Malvern House,KLM etc.Because I want to leran English. Most of all I am intersted in U.K. I love to read about a fashion,jewels,educations.Because I am a woman,teacher. Yes, I've read a newspaper in London. Because I should have find a flat and leran English. Yes, I think reading a newspaper in a foreign language is a good idea to study foreign language.

강사 첨삭

Hey there! I\'m happy that you did your homework. I actually enjoyed reading your composition. Please review the corrections that I made. Your composition is good but it can still be improved. ^^, Take care always! See yah! T.Lara 1.We shouln\'t have been to the restaurant >> We should have reserved a table.2.We should have waited the ship >> The shop should be open (now). / The shop should have opened by now.    or    It should...3.She should have limited the speed >> She shouldn\'t be doing 50. / She shouldn\'t be driving so fast.  /   She should be driving more slowly.4.I should have written address >> I should have written down her address. /  I should have written her address down.    or   I should have written it down.5.shouln\'t stopped without warning>> The driver in front shouldn\'t have stopped without warning. / ... shouldn\'t have stopped so suddenly.I read the Love UK,the news of Malvern House,KLM etc.Because I want to leran English.>>Most of all I am intersted in U.K.>> Most of all I am interested about U.K.I love to read about a fashion,jewels,educations.Because I am a woman,teacher.>> I love to read about fashion and jewelries because I am a woman and I also like to read books about education because I am a teacher.Yes, I\'ve read a newspaper in London. Because I should have find a flat and leran English.>> Yes, I\'ve read newspapers in London because I had to find my flat and learn English at the same time.Yes, I think reading a newspaper in a foreign language is a good idea to study foreign language. >>  Correct

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