Homework

2012-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: WRITE A COMPOSITION ABOUT: What makes you happy everyday? My familly and friends make me happy. They kind to me. I'm really thanks for my familly and friends.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]^^ Thanks for doing your compostion. I feel happy too about your answer in this homework. I agree wiht you, they are the people who always makes us happy. Value them as long as you have them with you. See you in class later. I encourage you to make longer compositions. I would be glad to check them. T.Liza^^ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:WRITE A COMPOSITION ABOUT: What makes you happy everyday?My familly and friends make me happy. >>My family and friends makes me happy.They kind to me. >>They ate are kind to me.I\'m really thanks for my familly and friends. >>I\'m really thankful because of my family and friends.

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