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We have to prevent Global warming. Many animals and plants are suffering from Global warming. The people living in the world will suffer from Global warming soon, too. Global warming is influenced by greenhouse gases. So we can prevent Global warming by reducing greenhouse gases. Greenhouse gases is made of six-gases. Carbon dioxide is a major cause of greenhouse gases. I searched action reducing greenhouse gases on the internet. We have to walk and ride bicycle or bus instead of ride the car. Also we can use food waste as compost. We throw away large garbage everyday. To dispose of the rubbish, we must burn it. we have to economize the power. Because we must burn the coal and oil to get the power. But Carbon dioxide comes from burning something.

GOOD MORNING, [이름]! I\'m so impressed with your essay. You did a good job! You even made your research! That is very impressive. I believe that everybody should be aware of global warming and its effects. You have very good examples and I think people should practice these to help prevent global warming. Instead of burning the garbage, let\'s try to think of other alternatives, like, recycling.   I\'ll see you in class. Take care! ~T. Ritch~ We have to prevent Global warming. >>We have to preven global warming. Many animals and plants are suffering from Global warming. >>Many animals and plants are suffering from global warming. >>Many living organisms are suffering because of this.The people living in the world will suffer from Global warming soon, too. >>The people living in this world will suffer from global warming soon, too.Global warming is influenced by greenhouse gases. >>CORRECT! So we can prevent Global warming by reducing greenhouse gases. >>So we can prevent global warming by reducing greenhouse gases. Greenhouse gases is made of six-gases. >>CORRECT! >>Greenhouse is composed of six gases. Carbon dioxide is a major cause of greenhouse gases. >>CORRECT!I searched action reducing greenhouse gases on the internet. >>CORRECT! We have to walk and ride bicycle or bus instead of ride the car. >>We have to walk and ride a bicycle or a bus instead of riding a car. Also we can use food waste as compost. >>Also,we can use food waste as compost. We throw away large garbage everyday. >>We throw away a large amount of garbage everyday. To dispose of the rubbish, we must burn it. >>CORRECT! >> To get rid of the trash, we burn it.we have to economize the power. Because we must burn the coal and oil to get the power. >>We have to economize the power because the power source is taken from burning coals and oil. But Carbon dioxide comes from burning something. >>CORRECT!