Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Jeny.
It's a Monday to start new week!
I prepared my homework.
Global warming is a big agenda in our society.
The reason of global warming is not sure.
But I think using fossil fuel and destroy forest cause global warming.
Because of the global warming, the average temperature of the earth rises 0.6 ℃ every year.
So the Antarctic glaciers are gradually melting and It cause the rise sea level.
If there are not any action to stop global warming, beyond imagine disaster can happen just like Tsunami.
강사 첨삭
Hello Rosa,
I do hope that you\'ll check the necessary corrections that I\'ve done. I do appreciate your time in writhing a composition. This could really be great practice for you create sentences. Keep it up!!!!
T. Jeny
Nice to
Hello Jeny.
>>Hello Jeny,
It\'s a Monday to start new week!
>>It\'s Monday to start the new week!I prepared my homework.>>correct
Global warming is a big agenda in our society.
>>correct
The reason of global warming is not sure.
>>I don\'t know the reason of global warming.
But I think using fossil fuel and destroy forest cause global warming.
>>But I think it is because of the use of fossil fuels and forests are being destroyed.
Because of the global warming, the average temperature of the earth rises 0.6 ℃ every year.
>> Because global warming, the average temperature of the earth rises 0.6 degree every year.
So the Antarctic glaciers are gradually melting and It cause the rise sea level.
>>The Antarctic glaciers are gradually melting and it causes the rise of sea level.
If there are not any action to stop global warming, beyond imagine disaster can happen just like Tsunami.
>> If there are no actions to stop global warming,Tsunami can happen beyond our imagination.
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