homework

Hello. Did you have a good day? Here is my homework. Please write an essay about your travel. What were the most memorable events that happened? I and my elder sister went to Damyang(담양). Do you know ‘Winter Sonata(겨울연가)’? It was very famous Korea drama. I traveled to the place featured in Winter Sonata. After I looked round there, I ate noodle on the noodle’s road. And then I was riding a bus to go to Tongyeong(통영) during about 3 hours. I arrived there at 10:00 pm so I went to the bed. Next day, I went up the mountain by cable car to see the whole view of Tongyeong(통영). After I came down from the hill, I ate many foods made from oyster. Also I saw the sight of wall painting. And I climbed a mountain to see the sunset at night. I was very tired but happy. :D

Hey there! Thank you for sharing your travel experiences with me.^^ I had a good day today! I enjoyed reading your composition. Please review my corrections. I will see you again tomorrow! Take care! Teacher Ritchel^^ Hello. >>>Correct!Did you have a good day?>>>Correct!Here is my homework.>>>Correct!Please write an essay about your travel. >>>Correct! What were the most memorable events that happened?>>>Correct!I and my elder sister went to Damyang(담양). >>>Me and my older siter went to Damyang.  Do you know ‘Winter Sonata(겨울연가)’? >>>Correct!  It was very famous Korea drama. >>>It was a very famous Korean drama. I traveled to the place featured in Winter Sonata. >>>Correct! After I looked round there, I ate noodle on the noodle’s road. >>>After exploring the place, I ate noodle on the road. And then I was riding a bus to go to Tongyeong(통영) during about 3 hours. >>>And then I rode a bus going to Tongyeong for about three hours.  I arrived there at 10:00 pm so I went to the bed. >>>I arrived there at 10:00 pm and then I went to bed.  Next day, I went up the mountain by cable car to see the whole view of Tongyeong(통영). >>>On the next day, using a cable car, I went up the mountain to see the whole view of Tongyeong. After I came down from the hill, I ate many foods made from oyster. >>>After coming down the mountain, I ate many foods which were made from oysters. Also I saw the sight of wall painting. >>>Also, I saw a wall painting. And I climbed a mountain to see the sunset at night. >>>Correct! I was very tired but happy. :D >>>Correct!