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학생이 쓴 원문
I don't like adventures a lot.
I think that I left for London to learn English alone was one of my adventures.
I'd like to go abroad with my family and friend to enjoy life before death. And that I get a marrige, have a sweet home is my new adventures. I hope it to success.
Yes,it was important. Because it made my mind biger, stronger,softer.
강사 첨삭
I don\'t like adventures a lot.>> I don\'t like much about adventures.I think that I left for London to learn English alone was one of my adventures.>> I think when I left for London to study English was one of my adventures.I\'d like to go abroad with my family and friend to enjoy life before death.
>> I\'d like to go abroad with my family and friends in order to enjoy life before I die.
And that I get a marrige, have a sweet home is my new adventures.
>> Getting married and having a sweet home will be my new adventures.
I hope it to success.>> I hope it will be successful.Yes,it was important. Because it made my mind biger, stronger,softer.
>> Yes, it was important because it made me wiser and stronger.
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