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Drink driving is very dangerous action and I pernoally think it's reckless. It can be killed people who have a family. I can drive too and if I drunk like soju or beer, I certainly use the bus, taxi and subway for safe not only me but other people. But, most of drunkers who think that I'm ok now I can drive myself. But, that's foolish. In my opinion, our law to penalty for drunkers should be more stronger. It's so helpful to be strict their behavior. If I were a high-rank goverment official, I enact the law that when drink driving, it must pay 10,000US dollar and be jailed at least 10years. We have to careful our action even though it's very tiny. It could be affected our life and it cannot return.

Hello there! I appreciate your effort in sending over your homework tonight, but i guess we still need to work on your grammar. Please go over my corrections for your improvement. I would be more than glad to discuss this matters in our class. T. Jen^^ Here are my corrections for you: Drink driving is very dangerous action and I pernoally think it\'s reckless. >> Driving drunk is very dangerous and prone to accident and I personally think it\'s reckless. It can be killed people who have a family. >> It could kill people who have a family. I can drive too and if I drunk like soju or beer, I certainly use the bus, taxi and subway for safe not only me but other people. >> I can drive the car too but if I drink soju or beer, I will certainly use the bus, taxi and subway for my safety. But, most of drunkers who think that I\'m ok now I can drive myself. >> But, unfortunately most drunkers think that it\'s ok for them to drive. But, that\'s foolish. >> CorrectIn my opinion, our law to penalty for drunkers should be more stronger. >> In my opinion, our law should implement a higher penalty for drunk drivers. It\'s so helpful to be strict their behavior. >> It\'s so helful to be strict in their behaviour. If I were a high-rank goverment official, I enact the law that when drink driving, it must pay 10,000US dollar and be jailed at least 10years. >> If I were a high-ranked government official, I will enact a law that let a drunk driver pay the penalty of U$ 10,000 and be in-jailed for at least 10 years. We have to careful our action even though it\'s very tiny. >> We have to be careful with our action even though it\'s very short. It could be affected our life and it cannot return. >> It could affect our life and we cannot turn back time.