homework

2012-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

1) I talked to the girl which car had broken down in front of the shop. 2) Mr. [Name], who is a taxi driver, lives on the corner. 3) We often visit our aunt in Norwich whose is in East Anglia. 4) This is the girl who comes from Spain. 5) That's Peter, the boy whose has just arrived at the airport.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear [이름], happy Monday!

Thank you so much for doing your homework today..

By the way here are the corrections I made for you baby..

I hope they could be of help..

Talk to you again later my dear and take care..:)

Teacher Cam^^

1) I talked to the girl which car had broken down in front of the shop.

>>I talked to the girl whose car had broken down in front of the shop.
2) Mr. [Name], who is a taxi driver, lives on the corner.

>>correct
3) We often visit our aunt in Norwich whose is in East Anglia.

>>We often visit our aunt in Norwich which is in East Anglia.
4) This is the girl who comes from Spain.

>>correct
5) That\'s Peter, the boy whose has just arrived at the airport.

>>That\'s Peter, the boy who has just arrived at the airport.

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