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2012-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello^^ 1) This is [Name] a book. (Peter) 2) Let's go to the Smiths. (Smiths) 3) The childern room is upstairs. (children) 4) Jonn sister is twelve years old. (John) 5) Susan and Steve bags have blue stickers. (Susan - Steve) Good bye^^

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear [이름], thank you once again for doing your homework.. Here are the modofications I made for you.. Take care always baby and have a good day..:* xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hello^^1) This is [Name] a book. (Peter) >>This is [Name]\'s book.2) Let\'s go to the Smiths. (Smiths)>>Let\'s go to the Smiths\'.3) The childern room is upstairs. (children) >>The children\'s room is upstairs.4) Jonn sister is twelve years old. (John) >>John\'s sister is twelve years old.5) Susan and Steve bags have blue stickers. (Susan - Steve)>>Susan and Steve\'s bags have blue stickes.Good bye^^

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