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2012-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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1) Abortion is to give up the baby. 2) It's illegal in Korea and not to mention, I agree our law related to abortion. When I became father, I really felt that abortion is terrible and if whoever who had abortion before must have a guilty. 3) Women who had sexual attacted. They're poor and I'll support them. 4) In official, it's illegal in Korea since 2006 so, most of hospitals cannot do any abortion. But, people who don't want to baby want to give up the baby. So, some hospitals do abortion that its' price is expensive.

강사 첨삭

Terrific Tuesday! (:Good job in class today.Keep up the good work! ^^Enjoy the rest of the evening!See you tomorrow.\" Learning is finding out what you already know,Doing is demonstrating that you know it,Teaching is reminding others that they know it as well as you do.We are all learners, doers, and teachers. \"-T. Jeny 1) Abortion is to give up the baby. >> Correct. OR Do you mean >> Abortion is to give up pregnancy.2) It\'s illegal in Korea and not to mention, I agree our law related to abortion. >> In Korea, It\'s illegal and I agree with the law.  When I became father, I really felt that abortion is terrible and if whoever who had abortion before must have a guilty. >> When I became a father, I felt how terrible abortion can be and whoever had abortion must really feel guilty.3) Women who had sexual attacted. >> Women who are sexually attracted. They\'re poor and I\'ll support them. >>Correct.4) In official, it\'s illegal in Korea since 2006 so, most of hospitals cannot do any abortion. >>It\'s been illegal since 2006 so hospitals cannot practice abortion. But, people who don\'t want to baby want to give up the baby. >> But pregnant people wants to give the baby up. So, some hospitals do abortion that its\' price is expensive. >> So, some hospitals offer abortion but the price is expensive.

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