homework 23

2016-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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In your opinion is being argumentative a positive trait or a flaw? Why or why not. Give some examples. I like to argue other people to solve the problem. but in Korea, the society tends to avoid to argue each other. Anyway, it is positive fact to talk with people. because it can make people more understand than previous. Argument is to solve the problem, not to fight others. So if you understand about this word's meaning exactly, that's all. A mature people in the society will be familiar to argue, so i think that it depends on social maturity if argument being a positive trait or a flaw.

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday my dear Sun!How are you?By the way thank you so much for sending in your hmework. You did very good!Keep up the good work. I will call you again tomorrow. Take care and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ In your opinion is being argumentative a positive trait or a flaw? Why or why not. Give some examples.I like to argue other people to solve the problem. >>I like to argue with people to solve the problem. but in Korea, the society tends to avoid to argue each other.>>But in Korea, people tend to avoid arguing with each other.Anyway, it is positive fact to talk with people. >>Anyway, it is a positive thing to talk with people. because it can make people more understand than previous. >>Because it can make the people understand the situation in a clearer perspective.Argument is to solve the problem, not to fight others. >>Having an agruement is a way to solve problems not to fight with others. So if you understand about this word\'s meaning exactly, that\'s all.>>correctA mature people in the society will be familiar to argue, so i think that it depends on social maturity if argument being a positive trait or a flaw. >>Mature people in the society will be more familoiar with argument. So I think it solely depends on the social maturity if it\'s a positive trait or a negative flaw.

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