Homework 23

2019-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Who would you like to have a big adventure with? I want to have big adventure with my best friend Ye Eun. Because, we did many big adventure such as homeschooling, traveling together. So, I want to have more big adventure with Ye Eun together.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Ramie!

I will see you later. Thank you for doing your homework.

-Teacher Shelly-

HOMEWORK:

Who would you like to have a big adventure with?

I want to have big adventure with my best friend Ye Eun.

>>> Correct!

Because, we did many big adventure such as homeschooling, traveling together.

>>> Correct!

So, I want to have more big adventure with Ye Eun together.

>>> Correct!

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