Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. We like (to visit) our grandmother on Sundays.
2. I might want (to borrow) your English notes.
3. The company was pleased (to receive) your thank-you letter.
4. The music will continue (playing) until you turn it off.
5. Would you mind (opening) a window?
Could you please proofread these sentences below for me?
Madagascar is developed with widly varied and unique echo system. There are many difference species to adapt in different ways. There are 2 examples such as lemurs, and palms.
First one is lemurs. Lemurs have diverse sizes, feeding habits, and they are in familial primate.
Second one is palms.
Each palm has specific condition and they cover all of the forests, mountains and valleys.
These two species do not compete with each other for resources.
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----T. Giselle----
1. We like (to visit) our grandmother on Sundays.>>>CORRECT2. I might want (to borrow) your English notes.>>>CORRECT3. The company was pleased (to receive) your thank-you letter.>>>CORRECT4. The music will continue (playing) until you turn it off.>>>CORRECT5. Would you mind (opening) a window? >>>CORRECTCould you please proofread these sentences below for me?
>>>Could you please proofread the sentences below for me? Madagascar is developed with widly varied and unique echo system.
>>>CORRECT ***Be careful with the way you spell the word \"widely\" and \"ecosystem\".
>>>OR Madagascar is developed with a wide variation and unique ecosystem.
There are many difference species to adapt in different ways.
>>>There are many different species which adapt in different ways.
There are 2 examples such as lemurs, and palms.
>>>Two examples are the lemurs and the palm trees. First one is lemurs.
>>>The first one is the lemur.
Lemurs have diverse sizes, feeding habits, and they are in familial primate.
>>>Lemurs have diverse sizes, feeding habits, and they are familial primates. Second one is palms.
>>>The second are the palm trees.Each palm has specific condition and they cover all of the forests, mountains and valleys.
>>>Each palm tree is unique and they cover all of the forests, mountains, and valleys. These two species do not compete with each other for resources.
>>>CORRECT
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