homework

1. It's easier to move. If I want to go long distance or live far away from bus stop and subway station, using car is very comfortable. 2. To use car is expenses. It must use the oil that is 1.5US dollar each 1 liter in Korea. In addition, you have to check each part like engine or tire for every 3~6 months. It will be pressure of your money. Second, if you get some accidents, it's more complicated. You should call employeer of insurance company for negotiaion. The worst thing you can go to jail if you cannot negotiate each other. 3. To strong law is my first on list. Too many drivers drive by themselves when they were drunken. It causes traffic accidents that people die or serious wound. We have to more strictly law related to drunk.

Hello there! Thank you very much for sending over your homework. I had a great time reading your answers. Anyway, please go over some of the corrections I made, and feel free to ask me if you have any questions. See you! Take care! -T. Jeny- 1.     It\'s easier to move. >> Correct.  If I want to go long distance or live far away from bus stop and subway station, using car is very comfortable. >> Correct. Just don\'t forget the usage of articles. >> If I want to go long distance or live far away from the bus stop and the subway station, using a car is very convenient.  2. To use car is expenses. >>To use a car is expensive. It must use the oil that is 1.5US dollar each 1 liter in Korea. >> A liter of oil costs $1.50 USD in Korea. In addition, you have to check each part like engine or tire for every 3~6 months. >> In addition, you have to check each part, like the engine or the tires every 3~6 months. It will be pressure of your money. >> It will cost you a lot. Second, if you get some accidents, it\'s more complicated. >> Correct. You should call employeer of insurance company for negotiaion. >> You should call the insurance company for negotiaion. The worst thing you can go to jail if you cannot negotiate each other. >> The worse thing is you\'d go to jail if you cannot negotiate with each other.  3. To strong law is my first on list. >> Implementing more strict laws is on the first list. Too many drivers drive by themselves when they were drunken. >> Too many drivers drive by themselves when they are drunk. It causes traffic accidents that people die or serious wound. >> It causes road accidents and  people may die or may be injured.  We have to more strictly law related to drunk. >> That\'s why we should implement more strict laws related to drunk driving.