homework_231011
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you like having conversations with older people? Why or Why not?
I like conversations with older people but only can understand me
because they can give me helpful advice. but I talk another people the conversation is difficult and not fun
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I like conversations with older people but only can understand me
because they can give me helpful advice.
>> I like having conversations with older people who can understand me because they can give me helpful advice.
but I talk another people the conversation is difficult and not fun
>> But if they don\'t understand me then the conversation can become difficult and not fun.
because they can give me helpful advice.
>> I like having conversations with older people who can understand me because they can give me helpful advice.
but I talk another people the conversation is difficult and not fun
>> But if they don\'t understand me then the conversation can become difficult and not fun.
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