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2023-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Demi

학생이 쓴 원문

How would you ask people to stop smoking for your sake? In normal situation, I speak smoking is bad for your health. But people don\'t care about that. So physically aggressive words more effect t[이름] ordinary words Therefore I will say something that can physically remind you of the seriousness.

강사 첨삭

Hello Lokki!
You were able to answer well and express your opinion about the topic. Great job! :)
Keep it up!!
~ T. Demi ^^

In normal situation, I speak smoking is bad for your health.

>> In normal situations, I would say smoking is bad for your health.

But people don\'t care about that.

CORRECT!

OR>> However, people often disregard this warning.

So physically aggressive words more effect t[이름] ordinary words

>> Therefore, using strong language that has a physical impact may be more effective t[이름] using ordinary words.

Therefore I will say something that can physically remind you of the seriousness.

>> As a result, I will say something that can serve as a physical reminder of the seriousness of this matter.

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