homework_231023
학생이 쓴 원문
What would you do if someone lent you one million dollars?
If who want no price to me , I will receive it
I will save 60% at bank, left 30% invest. and left 10% use myself.
I will buy electronic such as phone, speaker, laptop, computer etc...
And I will trip to the whole country.
강사 첨삭
Hello Lokko!
Wonderful job! 1 million is a big amount and yet you were still able to plan that well. T[이름]k you for answering your homework today. See you tomorrow! :)
~ T. Demi ^^
Wonderful job! 1 million is a big amount and yet you were still able to plan that well. T[이름]k you for answering your homework today. See you tomorrow! :)
~ T. Demi ^^
If who want no price to me , I will receive it
>> If they lent it without any interest then I will take it.
I will save 60% at bank, left 30% invest. and left 10% use myself.
>> I will save 60% at the bank, use 30% for investment and I\'ll use the remaining 10% for myself.
I will buy electronic such as phone, speaker, laptop, computer etc...
>> I will buy electronics such as a phone, speaker, laptop, computer, and many more.
And I will trip to the whole country.
>> Lastly, I will take a trip around the country.
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