homework_231109
학생이 쓴 원문
How are your friendships different now from when you were a child?
I thought childhood friendship was as easy as sharing candy.
But as an adult, it seems like everyone wears a mask.
It\'s hard to make friendships because people don\'t open heart easily.
강사 첨삭
Great composition [이름],
I was glad to read your answers. Have a wonderful day :) See you later!
~ T. Demi ^^
I thought childhood friendship was as easy as sharing candy.
CORRECT!
OR>>I used to believe that childhood friendships were as simple as sharing candy
But as an adult, it seems like everyone wears a mask.
CORRECT!
OR>>But as an adult, I\'ve realized that people often wear masks.
It\'s hard to make friendships because people don\'t open heart easily.
>> It\'s hard to make friends because people don\'t open their hearts easily.
OR>> It\'s challenging to form genuine connections easily.
I was glad to read your answers. Have a wonderful day :) See you later!
~ T. Demi ^^
I thought childhood friendship was as easy as sharing candy.
CORRECT!
OR>>I used to believe that childhood friendships were as simple as sharing candy
But as an adult, it seems like everyone wears a mask.
CORRECT!
OR>>But as an adult, I\'ve realized that people often wear masks.
It\'s hard to make friendships because people don\'t open heart easily.
>> It\'s hard to make friends because people don\'t open their hearts easily.
OR>> It\'s challenging to form genuine connections easily.
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