Homework

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Write a composition about your unforgettable event that happend during winter season. Tell me why you can not forget that event. My unforgettable event during winter are Chritsmas and My birthday. Because,During Christmas I gaved to my family. I like them. but Santa isn't ,I'm not child. OMG. I'm OK. I'm OK. Next is My birthday. my birthday. During my birthday. I gaved gift to My friends and family. and I buy new glasses. I like this event most. What is your favorite event?

Hello again [이름]^^ Thanks for sharing me your thoughts in this composition. I really feel happy that you can express your ideas well in writing, so with in speaking. Keep on doing this one. For me I like Christmas better than my birthday. I love Jesus and I feel happy that he was born. I love Jesus so much so with my whole family. We do a lot of preparations during Christmas^^. Thanks for tonight. T.Liza^^ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Write a composition about your unforgettable event that happend during winter season. Tell me why you can not forget that event.My unforgettable event during winter are Chritsmas and My birthday. >>My unforgettable events during winter are Christmas Day and my birthday.Because,During Christmas I gaved to my family. >> Because during Christmas I recieve presents from my family.I like them. >>Correctbut Santa isn\'t ,I\'m not child. >> But Santa is for kids and I\'m not a child anymore.OMG. >>CorrectI\'m OK. I\'m OK. >>Correct >>OR: That\'s just fine.Next is My birthday. >>Next is my birthday.my birthday. During my birthday. I gaved gift to My friends and family. >>During my birthday I recieve gifts from my family and friends. and I buy new glasses. >>I also buy new glasses.I like this event most.>>CorrectWhat is your favorite event? >>Correct >>BETTER: How about you? What is your favorite event?