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2012-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1.I think my good personality is making people fun. 2. Yes, I have tried before. 3.I c[이름]ged my environment. For example, I was finding fun something such a trip and go abroad. And [이름]ting people who have a sence of humor. When I feel their gag I can not recognised my bad habbit. 4.It depends on the friends and envronment.But It's important to make them relax and feel good. Most of all, They should find their own way.

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Hi Winnie.. I think everything that you wrote here really made sense. But you also have to be very careful with your tenses and the proper way to use words in a sentence. But no worries, just keep up the perseverance to improve your skills. Take care and talk to you soon then. Tecaher Lara 1.I think my good personality is making people fun.>> I think my good personality is making people laugh. >> I think my good personality is giving fun to people.2. Yes, I have tried before.>> Yes, I have tried that before.3.I c[이름]ged my environment. >> Correct >> or I decided to c[이름]ge my environment. For example, I was finding fun something such a trip and go abroad. >> For example, I looked for something that\'s really fun like went on a trip or abroad. And [이름]ting people who have a sence of humor. >> And [이름]ting people who have sense of humor. When I feel their gag I can not recognised my bad habbit.>> Whenever I could feel their humorous side, I no longer recognize my bad habit.4.It depends on the friends and envronment. >> It depends on your friends and environment. But It\'s important to make them relax and feel good. >> But it\'s important to make them feel good and relaxed. Most of all, They should find their own way. >> Most of all, they shoud also find their own way.

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