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Natural calamities are very powerful. People, who invented many technology machines such as airplane, cell phone and computer etc that are changing the world nowadays, still cannot natural calamities like earthquake, volcano and tsunami. That means people can change the world for better life but, cannot control the nature. Korea don't have any problem from those disasters until now and I think it's very lucky. But, we also have some diffrent disasters that flood, dry, hot and cold that causes by changing weather. It also will affect by global warming. I know if those disasters will continue, we will be faced serious situation such as food price will so high and some islands go under the sea by rising of the sea levels. We must try to effort to save our resources and try to develop more specific machines for prepare natural calamities. The most important thing is our mind that to have loving the nature.

Hello there! ^^ Good job for this homework. Keep it up! By the way, I included some corrections below, kindly review them. Happy Tuesday! ^^ T. Jenny Natural calamities are very powerful. >>Correct  People, who invented many technology machines such as airplane, cell phone and computer etc that are changing the world nowadays, still cannot natural calamities like earthquake, volcano and tsunami. >>People, who invented many technological machines such as airplane, cell phone and computer, cannot still do something about the natural calamities like earthquake, volcano erruption and tsunami. That means people can change the world for better life but, cannot control the nature. >>Correct  Korea don\'t have any problem from those disasters until now and I think it\'s very lucky. >>Korea never experience any of those disasters until now and I think we are very lucky. But, we also have some diffrent disasters that flood, dry, hot and cold that causes by changing weather. >>Although, we also have other kinds of disasters such as flood, El nino and climate changes. It also will affect by global warming. >>It caused by the global warming. I know if those disasters will continue, we will be faced serious situation such as food price will so high and some islands go under the sea by rising of the sea levels. >>I know if those disasters will continue, we will be facing a serious situation such as price hike and lands will be covered by water.We must try to effort to save our resources and try to develop more specific machines for prepare natural calamities. >>We must put an effort to save our resources and try to develop more spcific machines as a preparation to natural calamities. The most important thing is our mind that to have loving the nature. >>The most important thing is to have a loving heart and mind to nature.