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2012-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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If somebody offered you a large sum of money to do something illegal, would you take it? Why or why not? I don’t take it. Because I think that something to illegally do returns me in any way someday. If I take it, I will go to jail or be ridden with guilt. And easy come easy go as the proverb says. So I want to earn money legally through hard work.

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GOOD MORNING [이름]! Thank you so much for finding some time to answer your homework. I really appreciate it! Have a good one! If somebody offered you a large sum of money to do something illegal, would you take it? Why or why not?>>CORRECT!I don’t take it. Because I think that something to illegally do returns me in any way someday. >>I won\'t take it because I think that doing something illegal will bring me karma in someday.If I take it, I will go to jail or be ridden with guilt. >>If I take it, I might go to jail or be burdened with guilt. And easy come easy go as the proverb says. >>Easy come easy go as the proverb says. So I want to earn money legally through hard work. >>I want to earn money legally through hardwork.

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