homework

1. Do you think it's fair for women to receive a smaller pay than men? Why or why not? 2. What do you think are the occupations which are more suitable for women? 1. If women easily work than men, that men receive more pay than women stands to reason. I know most men do hard physical work than women. So far, men receive more pay then women. But there are many professional women nowadays. Therefore, some women receive performance-related pay. 2. In fact, gender doesn’t matter for having a job. Everyone has different characteristics. Some women have strong power than some men. So they are engaged in building or car industry. And my major is electronic engineering. There are some women in major. We maybe will be engineer as co-worker with men.

HELLO, dear! Once again, you did well with your composition. There are still some sentence constructions that needs polishing so please check out the corrections that I made below. I\'ll talk to you tomorrow. 1. Do you think it\'s fair for women to receive a smaller pay than men? Why or why not?2. What do you think are the occupations which are more suitable for women?>>CORRECT!1. If women easily work than men, that men receive more pay than women stands to reason. >>If women can easily work more than men and men receive a higher salary than women, then they deserve to hear a reason.I know most men do hard physical work than women. >>CORRECT! So far, men receive more pay then women. >>So far, men receive more pay than women.But there are many professional women nowadays. >>CORRECT! >>But there are a lot of professional women these days. Therefore, some women receive performance-related pay.>>CORRECT!2. In fact, gender doesn’t matter for having a job. >>In fact, gender doesn\'t matter in getting a job. Everyone has different characteristics. >>CORRECT! Some women have strong power than some men. >>Some women have stronger power than some men. So they are engaged in building or car industry. >>They are engaged in building or car industry. And my major is electronic engineering. >>My major is electronic engineering. There are some women in major. >>There are some women in my major. We maybe will be engineer as co-worker with men. >>We may become engineers who works with men.