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2012-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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What would you do if you were kidnapped by pirates? Oh.. it is terrible by thinking about being kidnapped by pirates. I don’t know how to do. First I have to calm down. And I try to talk to them. I will find out what they want to get. So I will do it if I can do it. But I will wait to be rescue if I can’t do it.

강사 첨삭

Ola!  This is your last correction for today. Good job! I\'ll talk to you tomorrow! What would you do if you were kidnapped by pirates?>>CORRECT!Oh.. it is terrible by thinking about being kidnapped by pirates. >>Oh... that is terrible, just thinking about being kidnapped by pirates.I don’t know how to do. >>I don\'t know what to do. First I have to calm down. >>CORRECT! And I try to talk to them. >>Then, I will try to talk to them I will find out what they want to get. >>I will find out what they want to get from me. So I will do it if I can do it. >>I will do it if I can. But I will wait to be rescue if I can’t do it. >>I will wait for the rescue if I can\'t. >>I will wait for the rescue if I can\'t do it.  

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