homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Oh yeah, that stres! It\'s making people look ugly, right! So I think pampering oneself is the best way to remove stress. ^^ By the way, I commend you for doing your homework tonihgt. It is highly appreciated. By the way, some corrections are made below. Please review them. Good night! ^
~T. Jeny
1. Stressful always exists. When I do work, do excercise, talk to someone even drive.
>>Stress always exists - when i do work, exercise, talk to someone, and even when I drive.
2. I guess there\'re some positive ways such as meet friends to talk, eat dilicious foods, go to travel and shopping, dance or drive.
>>I guess meeting friends, eating delicious foods, travel, shopping, dancing, or driving are ways to remove stress.
3. I guess there\'re also some negative ways like too much drink, smoke or break some goods.
>>I guess there are also negative acts such as drinking, smoking, and breaking something that may remove stress.
4. When I have stress, I try to shower with hot water and graceful body wash.
>>When I am stressed, I am taking a hot shower with body wash.
When I do my military service, I found it\'s helpful to eradicate my stress.
>>When I was doing my military service, I found it helpful to eradicate my stress.
In military, our acts were so limitted.
>>In military, our movements were so limited.
So, I had to find new way to delete my stress and finally, I found it.
>>Correct!
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