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To solve unemployment is one of our key point so, president candidates promised that if he/she wins the election, he/she'll focus on unemplyment to solve. Global recession affects not only Korea but all over the world. That means people don't want to use money, want to save for future. Hyundai Heavy Industies, HHI, No.1 company of shipbuilding, cut back their employeers two months ago that it's the first time since HHI found. POSCO, No.1 company of steel, is same situation. The key point is two companies didn't cut back employeers during hard situations like IMF and 2008 global recession. But, these days economy situation is really tough. Many companies do not have recruit plan. As a result, young generations suffer from unemployment. One of my friend finds to job and he is so nervous becase he is 30 that is a litle bit much age for freshman. To get the job, young generations have to low eyes that conglomerates are not everything.

Hllo there! Happy Monday!! Keep it up the good work. By the way, I made some corrections below. Kindly revoew them for your reference. See you in our next class. ^^ ~T. Jenny To solve unemployment is one of our key point so, president candidates promised that if he/she wins the election, he/she\'ll focus on unemplyment to solve. >>To solve unemployement is one of our goals. The candidates for presidency promised that if he/she wins the election, he\'ll/she\'ll focus on unemployment. Global recession affects not only Korea but all over the world. >>Correct That means people don\'t want to use money, want to save for future. >>That means people don\'t want to spend their money and want to save for the future. Hyundai Heavy Industies, HHI, No.1 company of shipbuilding, cut back their employeers two months ago that it\'s the first time since HHI found. >>Hyundai Heavy Industries (HHI), the no. 1 shipbuilding company, cut back their employees two months ago and it is the first time to happen since it was founded. POSCO, No.1 company of steel, is same situation. >>Also, POSCO, the no.1 steel company, is in the same situation. The key point is two companies didn\'t cut back employeers during hard situations like IMF and 2008 global recession. >>the point is these two companies didn\'t cut back during hard situations like IMF and 2008 global recession. But these days, economy situation is really tough. >>CorrectMany companies do not have recruit plan. >>Many companies do not have recruitment plan. As a result, young generations suffer from unemployment. >>Correct One of my friend finds to job and he is so nervous becase he is 30 that is a litle bit much age for freshman. >>One of my friends finds a job and he was so mervous because he is already 30 who is much older than freshmen.To get the job, young generations have to low eyes that conglomerates are not everything. >>To get a job, young generations have to lower down their eyes for conglomerates are not everything.