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I don't agree that when the children aged at 18 they should go out from the house. Because they are too young to live themselves. That means a young persom haven't raight judgment. Of couse it is not that all young person havn't right judgment. But many of them havn't right judgement. So until they can udge a something appropreate parents should protect them. And the other reaon is that they should prepare their dream. If they earn a money at outside, they can't have a enough time to prepare their dream. They should consume their time to work for their livelihood, for example rent, food expenses, school expenses, etc. So if we want to our child grow to nice person, we should protect them at least more than 18 years old.

Hello there! Wow! You have got a nice point here. Well, I think you are right. Youngsters must be properly guided by their parents. It doesn\'t really matter until what age should they stay with their parents. What matters most is how they learn things gracefully. Oh by the way, I made some corrections below. Kindly review them. Good night! ~T. Ritchel I don\'t agree that when the children aged at 18 they should go out from the house.Because they are too young to live themselves. >>I don\'t agree that a child aged 18 should move out from the house because they are too young. OR >>I don\'t agree that upon turning 18, we must already move out from our parent\'s house and be independent. It is too young for us to live by ourselves.That means a young persom haven\'t raight judgment. >>That means that a young person hasn\'t have the right judgment yet.Of couse it is not that all young person havn\'t right judgment. But many of them havn\'t right judgement. >>Of course it doesn\'t apply to all yooung people but many of them don\'t possess it yet.So until they can udge a something appropreate parents should protect them. >>Therefore, until they can already judge something appropriately, parents should protect them.And the other reaon is that they should prepare their dream. >>Also, they should prepare to attain their dream.If they earn a money at outside, they can\'t have a enough time to prepare their dream. >>If they will earn the money while they are living indepently, they can\'t have an enough time to prepare for their dream.They should consume their time to work for their livelihood, for example rent, food expenses, school expenses, etc. >>They will just consume their time to work for their livelihood - rent, food, school expenses, etc.So if we want to our child grow to nice person, we should protect them at least more than 18 years old. >>So if we want to nurture our child to be a nice person, we should protect them until they can already stand on their own feet.