homework
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1. We met a boy who was carrying a heavy bag.
2. The house was decorated with lights that looked beautiful.
3. The robbers saw the policeman who ran away.
4. I found the door open who went inside.
5. The police saw the body that was floating down the river.
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1. We met a boy who was carrying a heavy bag.
>> Correct!
OR >> We met a boy carrying a heavy bag.2. The house was decorated with lights that looked beautiful.
>> Decorated with lights, the house looked beautiful.
>> The house was decorated with lights so it looked beautiful.3. The robbers saw the policeman who ran away.
>> Seeing the policeman, the robbers ran away.4. I found the door open who went inside.
>> Finding the door open, I went inside.5. The police saw the body that was floating down the river.
>> Correct!
OR >> The police saw the body floating down the river.
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