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My best friend.... I would like to introduce about my best friend who named 성희(SungHee). I have been knowing her from a high-school, which we have kept a good relationship each other. Now, she is running a stable design company and is a mom for a daughter as well. I have never thought about her because we are just close friend. On a second thought, although we are very different each other, how could we keep with a friend? She is a short-hair style from the high-school until now. I never seen her long-hair style since that. She likes a playing golf but I don't like it. She is a very activity woman and also a leader style. She love not just alcohols, but also a chat. Um.....I oppose with her. But we have common thinking, idea and have strong beliefs in ourselves.

Hi MISS [이름]^^ It\'s my pleasure to read your composition. I am really happy to know a bit about your best friend.^^Great job in expressing your ideas^^ KUDOS! I am impressed about your ideas.I know that you are a good person and that is the reason why your relationship with your bestfriend is really good. I am soproud fo you MISS [이름]^^ Keep up the good work!See you tomorrow^^ Take Care!Sweetdreams! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: My best friend....I would like to introduce about my best friend who named 성희(SungHee). >>I would like to introduce my best friend,she is 성희(SungHee). OR >> I would like to introduce my best friend named 성희(SungHee). I have been knowing her from a high-school, which we have kept a good relationship each other. >> I\'ve know her since we were in highschool and we kept a good relationship with each other,Now, she is running a stable design company and is a mom for a daughter as well. >> Now, she owns a stable design company and a mom of a daughter as well.I have never thought about her because we are just close friend. >> I have never thought about her because we are just close friends. On a second thought, although we are very different each other, how could we keep with a friend? >>On a second thought, although we were very different with each other, how could we keep a good friendship? She is a short-hair style from the high-school until now. >>She used to have a short-hair style from the highschool until now. I never seen her long-hair style since that. >> I\'ve never seen her with a long hair OR >> I\'ve never seen her having a long hair.She likes a playing golf but I don\'t like it. >>She likes playing golf but I don\'t like it.She is a very activity woman and also a leader style. >>She is an active woman and a good leader.She love not just alcohols, but also a chat. >> CorrectUm.....I oppose with her. >> I opposed her.But we have common thinking, idea and have strong beliefs in ourselves. >> But we have common ideas and have strong beliefs within ourselves.