homework

Hello there! Thank you for sharing your views about athletes. Kindly go over my corrections please. Have a great day!

-T. Jeny-

Today, I tell you not sport but athlete.

>> Today, I\'m going to talk about athletes, not sports.

20 years ago, athlete is not a popular job for children but nowadays that is completely opposite.

>> 20 years ago, athletes are not popular to children but nowadays that is completely opposite of the reality.

Maybe they think athlete can make lots of money and looks like nice.

>> Maybe, they think that athletes can make lots of money and they job looks nice.

I guess it\'s a tip of an iceburg.

>>  I guess it\'s just a tip of the iceburg.

It\'s just a few.

>> It\'s very few.

In addition, normal salary men can work until 55 age if they have not criminal or bribe etc but most of athlete stop so young about 35 and maximum 40 age.

>> In addition, normal salary men can work until the age of 55 if they don\'t have a criminal record but most athletes retire at such a young age between 35 and 40 .

That means it\'s so unstable for future.

>> It means that they have no stable future.

In order to become popular athlete, you must put your effort huge the amount of practice.

>>  In order to become a popular athlete, you must put your effort through constant practice.

I saw the book which contains \"If you want to expert in your job, you must practice and study 10,000 hours\"

>> I read a book that says, \"If you want to become expert in your job, you must practice and study 10,000 hours everyday\"

It emphasizes the practice\'s important.

>>  It emphasizes the importance of practice.

Most of sucess athletes sincerely practiced and try to no drink, no smoke. 

>> Most successful athletes sincerely practice and they avoid drinking and smoking. 

 Whatever you do, faithfulness is important.

>> Correct.