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Q. why do you like/don't like shopping.I am excited to hear your thoughts about it. To be honest, I do not tend to like shopping. Once I worked as a environmentalist of a specific organization in Korea. I have known that all sort of the wast is harmful on our planet. Thus, I am thinking that one of the main culprits destroying the natural environment is the shopping because this makes massive wrapping papers, plastic bags and styroforms. Moreover, when I am shopping on the street shops or department stores, I feel so tired quickly. This is a big reason why I do not like it. Of course, I also go to shop to buy somethings but not too much. :-)

HI MISS [이름]^^ I appreciate that you always do your best everyday especially in expressing your thoughts.^^ SUPERB! I enjoye reading your composition tonight! I learned something from you today.I knew something about you. I was surprised. You are an environmentalis before. Great! I do agree with your opinion. I hope that you will have a great sleep tonight!See you tomorrow^^ Have fun tomorrow^^Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: Q. why do you like/don\'t like shopping.I am excited to hear your thoughts about it.To be honest, I do not tend to like shopping. >> I tend not to like shopping OR >> I do not like shoppingOnce I worked as a environmentalist of a specific organization in Korea. >> I worked once as an environmentalist of a specific organization in Korea. I have known that all sort of the wast is harmful on our planet. >> I have known all of kinds of waste that is harmful for our planet. Thus, I am thinking that one of the main culprits destroying the natural environment is the shopping because this makes massive wrapping papers, plastic bags and styroforms. >> Thus, I am thinking that one of the main culprit that destroys our natural environment is shopping because this makes massive wrapping papers, plastic bags and styrofoams.Moreover, when I am shopping on the street shops or department stores, I feel so tired quickly. >> Moreover, when I do shopping on the street shops or department stores, I easily get tired.This is a big reason why I do not like it. >>Correct!Of course, I also go to shop to buy somethings but not too much. :-) >>Of course, I also go to shop to buy somethins but not too much.