Homework

2012-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1. We don't travel to any country _____ crime rate is known to be very high. that 2. By my 50th birthday, I _____ in my current profession for over 20 years. would be 3. Finally John bought a _____ sedan. new four-door green 1988 4. My father taught me basic accounting and _____. typing 5. _____ my childhood, I studied in Paris. While

강사 첨삭

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_Teacher Verna

1. We don\'t travel to any country _____ crime rate is known to be very high.
that

>>We don\'t travel to any country whose crime rate is known to be very high.
2. By my 50th birthday, I _____ in my current profession for over 20 years.
would be

>>By my 50th birthday, I will have been in my current profession for over 20 years.
3. Finally John bought a _____ sedan.
new four-door green 1988

>>Finally John bought a new green 1988 four-door sedan.
4. My father taught me basic accounting and _____.
typing
>>Correct

5. _____ my childhood, I studied in Paris.
While

>>During my childhood, I studied in Paris.

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