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2012-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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What are you planning to prepare for the year-end party? I will have the party at 30 day. I will prepare crab and beer.. 3 familes will have a dinner party together. one family have twe son. another family have one daughter. We will have dinner and talk about they job. I hope will be great party.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Thank you very much for making your homework. Anyway, I'm really hoping it'll be a good time for all of you. I do know that preparing is a bit difficult, but you can do it! See you! Take care.

-Louise-

What are you planning to prepare for the year-end party?

 I will have the party at 30 day.

>> I will have the party on the 30th.

 I will prepare crab and beer..

>> I will prepare crabs and some beers.

 3 familes will have a dinner party together.

>> 3 families will have a dinner party together.

 one family have twe son.

>> One of the families has 2 sons.

 another family have one daughter.

>> The other has a daughter.

 We will have dinner and talk about they job.

>> We will have dinner and talk about our respective jobs.

 I hope will be great party.

>> I hope it will be a great party.

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