homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thank you very much for making your homework. Anyway, I'm really hoping it'll be a good time for all of you. I do know that preparing is a bit difficult, but you can do it! See you! Take care.
-Louise-
What are you planning to prepare for the year-end party?
I will have the party at 30 day.
>> I will have the party on the 30th.
I will prepare crab and beer..
>> I will prepare crabs and some beers.
3 familes will have a dinner party together.
>> 3 families will have a dinner party together.
one family have twe son.
>> One of the families has 2 sons.
another family have one daughter.
>> The other has a daughter.
We will have dinner and talk about they job.
>> We will have dinner and talk about our respective jobs.
I hope will be great party.
>> I hope it will be a great party.
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