homework

1) I like to bunji-jumping or sky-diving or want go to the Africa or Amazon so I tell you I'm an adventurous person. 2) Sometimes, we're faced with difficult problems like death, sick or bankrupt. It's sadness but, of course, life contains bad siuations that will strong for our mental. If you overcome those, you'll more strong. 3) If no adventure in my life, it's very simple and boring that's the why I want to adventurous life. 4) When I went to Switzerland, Interaken, where very famous about beautiful place, I had bunji-jumping near by cliff. Before jump, I thought that bunji-jumping is not a dangerous because safety belt tights me. But, when I stand up at the bar, I felt some afraid. Finally, I jumped and safe come back. If I have chance more adventurous activities, I must do it.

Hello there [이름]! ^^, How are you?How was your holiday?I hope you had fun. Anyway, I\'m done checking your homework and I wrote down my corrections for you. If you ample time, please go over them and analyze. You take care always and see you in class! :) T. Jeny 1) I like to bunji-jumping or sky-diving or want go to the Africa or Amazon so I tell you I\'m an adventurous person. >>I can say that I\'m an adventurous person because I like to do bungee jumping, skydiving or going to an Africa or Amazon trip.2) Sometimes, we\'re faced with difficult problems like death, sick or bankrupt. >>Sometimes, we\'re faced with difficult problems like death, sickness or bankruptcy. It\'s sadness but, of course, life contains bad siuations that will strong for our mental. >>It\'s sad, but of course, life contains bad situations that will strengthen our minds. If you overcome those, you\'ll more strong.>>If you overcome those experiences, you\'ll be stronger. 3) If no adventure in my life, it\'s very simple and boring that\'s the why I want to adventurous life. >>I want an adventurous life because if there\'s no adventure, my life will be boring and simple.4) When I went to Switzerland, Interaken, where very famous about beautiful place, I had bunji-jumping near by cliff. >>When I went to Interaken, Switzerland which is a very beautiful place, I experienced bungee jumping there. Before jump, I thought that bunji-jumping is not a dangerous because safety belt tights me. >>Before jumping, I thought that bungee jumping is not a dangerous activity because there are safety belts that will hold me.But, when I stand up at the bar, I felt some afraid. >>But when I stand up the bar, I felt Finally, I jumped and safe come back. >>Finally, I jumped and came back safe. If I have chance more adventurous activities, I must do it. >>If I have the chance to do more adventurous activities, I will do it.