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today, I feel vary tird....ㅠㅠ
Hi John,
I arrived in the USA last Monday. We left the Rome, flew over the Alps and made a quick stop in the London. There we went shopping in the Harrods, visited the Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in the Hyde Park. On the following day we left for the New York. The time on board wasn't boring as there were two films to watch on the monitor. The people on the plane were all the Italian. Before we landed at the JFK airport, we saw the Statue of Liberty, The Ellis Island and the Empire State Building. The hotel I stayed in was on the corner of the 42nd Street and the 5th Avenue. I don't like the hotels very much, but I didn't have the time to rent an apartment.
Please say hello to Peter and Mandy.
Yours,
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Bye~~
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Hellotoday, I feel vary tird....ㅠㅠ>>Today I feel very tired...:DHi John,I arrived in the USA last Monday.
>>correct
We left the Rome, flew over the Alps and made a quick stop in the London.
>>We left Rome, flew over the Alps and made a quick stop in London.
There we went shopping in the Harrods, visited the Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in the Hyde Park.
>>correct
On the following day we left for the New York.
>>On the folliwng day we left for New York.
The time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on the monitor.
>>correct
The people on the plane were all the Italian.
>>The people on the plane were all Italian.
Before we landed at the JFK airport, we saw the Statue of Liberty, The Ellis Island and the Empire State Building.
>>correct
The hotel I stayed in was on the corner of the 42nd Street and the 5th Avenue.
>>correct
I don\'t like the hotels very much, but I didn\'t have the time to rent an apartment.>>correctPlease say hello to Peter and Mandy.>>correctYours,Peter>>correctBye~~
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